Survivor
Introduction (who, where, what, why)
Emerging from the waves I looked up to see the beach was deserted and my, two cousins were. did not know how to survive on a beach all alone.
The main event) I and my two cousins got left at the beach. (show, n not tell)
I and my two cousins had got left behind by our own families and we have stranded at a beach in France me and my two cousins had found a liter and a flint in the sand by a log was a dead bird was and I had a hatchet in the bag that I was holding on my back and yes we were still on a beach in France and we did not have proper food to eat but what we did have to eat I knew we were going to survive because we were eating and we had water that I would not drink because it was sea saltwater.
Main eve). Finding a place to sleep- (suspense is sheltered)
I and my two cousins had not found a shelter to sleep in yet. but what we did find was a little rock cave at the beach in the rocks and it was almost like it was a little hut because it had everything in it and there were so much useful things in it that we could use and it looked like home it had everything I had in my room at my real house.
Main Event) we find a way home -(the most exciting part)
I and my two cousins found a way home after all of the experiences we have had at that beach and how we all found our way home back to our own families. we had found this bike track on the left side of the beach and we followed it and we ended up at the back of a shop and the shop was called France originals we jumped over the fence and saw that we were almost home” HOME I SHOUTED HOME” we are almost home so we all ran up two hills and then we saw our families and our houses and we were home.
Ending) we thank God we are home safely -(thankfulness that God provides)
We all thank God that we all stuck together and we all got home safely and we all thank God that he the creator that he invented everything on earth.
THE END
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