COLD TASK🥶🧊

in-class we do a "cold task" to find out what we already know. Our cold task was on narrative writing. this is a snapshot of what I can do in 30 minutes by myself.

My next step is to use 2A and Figurative language and similies properly and punc properly.

Once upon a time, there was me my sister and my two brothers went hunting for a hunt for any kind of animal. and then as soon as we got to the hunting spot we all saw a massive, beasty boar running along the road then my oldest brother told my other two siblings and me to jump out and tackle this big beast and so that's what we did, and then he stopped his truck and jumped out of his truck and grabbed his gun.🔫                                                         

my other silly brother ran in front of the gun and my older brother had just shot the gun and my silly brother was lucky that the bullet🚅ullet��� had just missed the middle of his head otherwise he would have been dead that day and thank god it missed him because it was his birthday on that day...