hello there 🎇NOW YOU SEE IT, NOW YOU DON'T

 I HAVE BEEN USING SHOW NOT TELL TO MAKE MY NARRATIVE INTERESTING

I DO THIS I HAVE TRIED TO HAVE _FIGERITIVE LANGUAGE DESCRIPTIVE LANGUAGE AND MAKE SURE MY WORK IS COMPLETE

THIS IS A STORY THAT MYSELF, Tailah<3, Liam, Zoe, , Mesui, Lenore Alice

 The park ride 

There were once two sisters who were not at all alike; they were different in every way.

The Older sister was on the more adventurous side, doing dangerous stunts, enjoying the sunlight, and Playing with her friends all day, never having a second thought about what she was doing. But the younger sister was quite the opposite,  spending her days isolating herself within the walls of her room, every day losing herself in books never wanting to see what was on the outside. 

One faithful morning 

The mother of these two had splendid news, “We're going to Rainbows End!” The eldest sister shouted with joy while the younger sister's face turned pale instantly “Are you joking? I can't go there!“ she shouted as sweat and tears trickled down her face. “eh don’t be a baby!“ the older sister exclaimed, she tightly gripped the younger sister's hands and dragged her outside to the car, “stop! Let me go!“ the younger sister shouted, their mother dismissed her words then pushed her in the car. As soon as they got there the older sister went straight to the nearest ride and begged to go on it “It's huge!“ she said “it looks rather unstable, are you sure it's safe?“ the younger sister whispered “don't judge a book by its cover!“ the older sister said with a grin.

It was only a mere two minutes before she was strapped in and ready to go, “have fun!” the mother shouts, she was twitchy and jumpy, her face said it all. The ride started and she looked confused, she thought the ride just spun her in circles for endless amounts of time but the ride rose off the floor and started swinging, at that moment her smile had faded as she realized she made a very big mistake. Her face went pale as she froze in place with nothing in her brain but the words “get me off” she closed her eyes and screamed as she rose hundreds of feet off the air, up, down, left, right, it went on for a while and she screamed my name the whole way through.

When the ride had ended she couldn't move, she was completely frozen in place, hair sticking up, clothes soaked in tears, and heart beating rapidly like African drums, I guess you could say there was a rhythm to it. She was frozen in place like a deer in headlights, not being able to lift a finger

The younger sister was also terrified but without a second thought, she hopped onto the ride.                                                    

 

   

THE GOLDFISH BOY🐠🐟

 What I like about this book is that it is chaptered and that I like how he takes notes of what's happening 24/7 and I like how the writer tells the boy's life story--illustrated by Lisa Thomas- :)

  

Testing the waters🤙

Here is my Testing the water response that I did in class this week I HOPE YOU DONT FIND THIS INTERESTING.✝🤙

How health are you

COLD TASK🥶🧊

in-class we do a "cold task" to find out what we already know. Our cold task was on narrative writing. this is a snapshot of what I can do in 30 minutes by myself.

My next step is to use 2A and Figurative language and similies properly and punc properly.

Once upon a time, there was me my sister and my two brothers went hunting for a hunt for any kind of animal. and then as soon as we got to the hunting spot we all saw a massive, beasty boar running along the road then my oldest brother told my other two siblings and me to jump out and tackle this big beast and so that's what we did, and then he stopped his truck and jumped out of his truck and grabbed his gun.🔫                                                         

my other silly brother ran in front of the gun and my older brother had just shot the gun and my silly brother was lucky that the bullet🚅ullet��� had just missed the middle of his head otherwise he would have been dead that day and thank god it missed him because it was his birthday on that day...

Narrative 2022 ortargo times

 

this story is Abt pig hunting 🐖🐗

 Once upon a time, there was me my sister and my two brothers went hunting on a hunt for any kind of animal. and then as soon as we got to the hunting spot we all saw a massive, beasty boar running along the road then my oldest brother told me and my other two siblings to jump out and tackle this big beast and so that's what we did, and then he stopped his truck and jumped out of his truck and grabbed his gun.                                                         

my other silly brother ran in front of the gun and my older brother had just shot the gun and my silly brother was lucky that the bullet had just missed the middle of his head otherwise he would have been dead that day and thank god it missed him because it was his birthday on that day...