Writing Snapshot

This is an unedited snapshot of my writing. We were asked to write a recount about moment in time with friends. Dated March 2021   

2021 camp

             On tuesday 2nd march me and my class went to the holiday park in waitangi.when we got there i                           unpacked my stuff out of the bus and then i put my stuff under the shelta then went to go and help lenor set up the tent then we got the tent up before it started raining then we had hello karakia then we had some lunch and then the rain stopped.then i put my stuff in the tent then lenor put her stuff in the tent then like 2 or 4 hours later we had dinner like 9:00.then after dinner we all had to go to bed me and lenor went to bed like late as.then the next day we had breakfast first then we went to hop in the water but when i did get in it was really warm then i felt like i was in a lukewarm spa tub and then it went cold when the rain started pouring down in the water then 5 minutes later it went back to warm  because of the rain and then we went back to camp